Hello Martin,
How are you doing? I hope all is well with you. Remember the Guitar I borrowed from you last week, unfortunately, it got damaged, two of its strings were broken off, and you have nothing but me to blame for. I am extremely sorry for my negligence towards handling your guitar. Please allow me to explain.
It was my niece's birthday this Monday, and I had arranged to play music for the arrived children and guests at the function. I must say your guitar is an amazing piece of instrument, the music it produced left all the people spell bound. Immediately after the performance, I got busy paying attention towards needs of the guest and left guitar unattended, which I should not have done at any cost, and now regret it a lot. Consequently, Couple of children who got hold of the guitar pulled strings enough to break them. I know how dear that guitar was to you and how you could not stop talking about it whenever we met. For this stupidity of mine, I have already ordered same set of strings from amazon and it will be delivered this Saturday, moreover, I have taken appointment of my music teacher to install those strings and check guitar for any other damage. I hope that brings some relief to you. Once again I apologise for my negligence towards your guitar.
Hope to see you soon.
Your Friend always,
Amar
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 26.3917525773 15% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 246.0 937.175257732 26% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 53.0 206.0 26% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64150943396 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.69816787641 3.78020617076 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59596861379 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 41.0 127.690721649 32% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.77358490566 0.622605031667 124% => OK
syllable_count: 72.0 290.88556701 25% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4685347787 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.2 76.5299724578 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.6 16.8248392259 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197013988689 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919900289542 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593981913253 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132203970192 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076928692301 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.45 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 11.0 41.2886597938 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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