Hello Martin,
How are you doing? I hope all is well with you. Remember the Guitar I borrowed from you last week, unfortunately, it got damaged, two of its strings were broken off, and you have nothing but me to blame for. I am extremely sorry for my negligence towards handling your guitar. Please allow me to explain.
It was my niece's birthday this Monday, and I had arranged to play music for the arrived children and guests at the function. I must say your guitar is an amazing piece of instrument, the music it produced left all the people spell bound. Immediately after the performance, I got busy paying attention towards needs of the guest and left guitar unattended, which I should not have done at any cost, and now regret it a lot. Consequently, Couple of children who got hold of the guitar pulled strings enough to break them. I know how dear that guitar was to you and how you could not stop talking about it whenever we met. For this stupidity of mine, I have already ordered same set of strings from amazon and it will be delivered this Saturday, moreover, I have taken appointment of my music teacher to install those strings and check guitar for any other damage. I hope that brings some relief to you. Once again I apologise for my negligence towards your guitar.
Hope to see you soon.
Your Friend always,
Amar Desai
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, moreover, so, well, as to, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1111.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 242.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59090909091 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44309947793 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603305785124 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.8847573543 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0666666667 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1333333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226869998701 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839644066713 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558814033596 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161475218315 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553296417261 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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