Writing task 1 (a letter)
You have recently been on a business trip to see some equipment that your company needs. Write a letter to the company that owns this equipment and say
– Describe the equipment.
– Ask for the features and specifications of this equipment.
– Explain why your company needs this equipment.
Dear Sir,
it was pleasure visting your factory in China last week and thankyou for taking us through the antenna product line which you company manufactures. The tour helped us to understand your products in more detail and give us deep insights on specific applications where your product can be used.
In refrence to the discussion we had in your office,i would like to specifically highlight the1.2 meter R series offset feed terminals which we had tested in demo lab, as i would like to know more information like the features, diagrams and specifications for this product, would it be possible to send me a manual and datasheet for this product by tommorow?
I would like to inform you that my company has won a large scale project for deployment of 1.2 meter terminals in India and are evaluating this product ,it would be hepful if you could send the aforesaid details so that we can come to a conclusion regarding the product shortlisting and deployment.
Looking forward to your earliest response.
Yours sincerely
vinshu
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2018-12-06 | vinshu koul | 78 | view |
| 2018-08-15 | Khalsa kaur | 78 | view |
| 2017-10-11 | RSudhir | 73 | view |
| 2017-06-10 | jay.patel.4545 | 64 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, it was pleasure visting your factory in ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
... to the discussion we had in your office,i would like to specifically highlight th...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to the discussion we had in your office,i would like to specifically highlight th...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...als which we had tested in demo lab, as i would like to know more information li...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ls which we had tested in demo lab, as i would like to know more information like...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tommorow? I would like to inform you that my company has won a large scale p...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u that my company has won a large scale project for deployment of 1.2 meter term...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...in India and are evaluating this product ,it would be hepful if you could send the...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r earliest response. Yours sincerely vinshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99428571429 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78360212967 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.194516472 44.8134815571 275% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.666666667 76.5299724578 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 16.8248392259 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141389770478 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716712878007 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.025132477733 0.0603063233224 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820215969796 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251829641936 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 8.37731958763 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 8.62886597938 214% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.