You due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to resume because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer in your
- Explain your situation
- Describe your situation
-Tell him/her will you think you can start.
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to the extend my joining date by an additional week as i am in still in the process of moving my household goods from Delhi to Hyderabad.
As per the employment contract, i am supposed to join on 1st of december but due to delay from my mover who was supposed to pack and pick up my household goods last week.I cannot change the mover at this last hour as I have paid advance to him for moving my goods additionally handover to my existing employer will get delayed by a few days thus delaying my joining date by an additional week.
Hence, I would request to change the employment start date from 1st of december to 8th of december as I would have finished with the movement of my goods to Hyderabad and the handover process meanwhile I will keep you posted on any further changes should there be any.
I look forward to your acceptance and apologize for the last minute delay.
Your's sincerely
vinshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to the extend ...
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Line 3, column 30, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...r Sir, I am writing in reference to the extend my joining date by an additional week a...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 34, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[2]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...r, I am writing in reference to the extend my joining date by an additional week a...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y joining date by an additional week as i am in still in the process of moving my...
^
Line 5, column 33, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...bad. As per the employment contract, i am supposed to join on 1st of december ...
^
Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...nd pick up my household goods last week.I cannot change the mover at this last ho...
^
Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e last minute delay. Yours sincerely vinshu
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, look, still, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51057349175 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 16.3608247423 208% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.992330606 44.8134815571 297% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.6 76.5299724578 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 34.8 16.8248392259 207% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.2 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128504922225 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865101899822 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509165411017 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700628584669 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0430652174589 0.0580467560999 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 8.37731958763 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 8.62886597938 313% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.6 8.54432989691 183% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.