You due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to resume because you have some problems.Write a letter to your new employer in your- Explain your situation- Describe your situation-Tell him/her will you think you can start.

Essay topics:

You due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to resume because you have some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer in your
- Explain your situation
- Describe your situation
-Tell him/her will you think you can start.

Dear Ma,

Thank you for the opportunity given to work as an Accountant in your prestigious firm. I am writing with regards my resumption on monday nextweek. I will like to bring to your notice that will not be able to resume as earlier informed.

I regret, informing you that i will not be able to resume nextweek as stated in my offer letter. This is due to some predicaments that befall me which was out of my control. I lost my foster mother in a terrible car accident, this caught me unaware and resulted to a state of coma. Fortunately for me, I was resuscitated on getting to the hospital and the the doctor advised me to take a rest.

Howeever, I will like to request if it is possible for me to reschedule my resumption to 3rd of November 2018, It will enable me to pay the last homage to a caring mother.

I hope you understand my situation and I am eagerly looking forward in hearing from you.

Yours, Faithfully,

Marian.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ork as an Accountant in your prestigious firm. I am writing with regards my resum...
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Message: Did you mean 'would'?
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...rds my resumption on monday nextweek. I will like to bring to your notice that will ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... able to resume as earlier informed. I regret, informing you that i will not b...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...formed. I regret, informing you that i will not be able to resume nextweek as...
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...ng you that i will not be able to resume nextweek as stated in my offer letter. ...
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...ot be able to resume nextweek as stated in my offer letter. This is due to some...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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.... This is due to some predicaments that befall me which was out of my control. I...
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...scitated on getting to the hospital and the the doctor advised me to take a rest. Ho...
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Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...scitated on getting to the hospital and the the doctor advised me to take a rest. Ho...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WILL_LIKE_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'would'?
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...vised me to take a rest. Howeever, I will like to request if it is possible for m...
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Line 7, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...sible for me to reschedule my resumption to 3rd of November 2018, It will enable ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46551724138 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71048155603 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603448275862 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1846557465 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240707280335 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0944581989182 0.0766984524023 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100821517722 0.0603063233224 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158384239873 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863616205926 0.0580467560999 149% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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