You and some friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and service.
Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter:
give details of your visit to the restaurant
explain the reason for the celebration
say what was good about the food and the service
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my satisfaction with the food and services that your restaurant offered on 30th December.
Last weekend, I celebrated a birthday party with some of my friends to mark the day I turned 22 years old and also finished my university programme.
While I was surfing Facebook, I came across / accidentally saw an advertisement about your restaurant. At first, I was completely / very much impressed with the photos uploaded on the page and with all the comments from customers, so I decided to make a table reservation at your place.
I order five dishes including desserts, and they really suited our taste. Also, the interior design created a soothing atmosphere because it was decorated with different types of bonsai. More importantly, the staff was quite hospitable and enthusiastic. They always had a smile on their faces to welcome customers and were willing to help us when needed.
Once again, I really appreciated for making my day special, and I would recommend it to my relatives and other acquaintances.
Yours faithfully,
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17613636364 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04179633337 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.715909090909 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0767512414 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.222222222 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189586306694 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065811793442 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651920853974 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987158469181 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795979256554 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, really, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17613636364 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04179633337 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.715909090909 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0767512414 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.222222222 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189586306694 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065811793442 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0651920853974 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987158469181 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795979256554 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.