You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English-speaking country. You are not satisfied with condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter
Introduce yourself
Explain what is wrong with furniture
Say what action you would like the landlord to take
Hello Mr. Adam,
I am Irfan Ullah, your tenant in Highburry building. I am writing you this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the miserable state of some of the furniture.
As you know, I moved into this apartment last December, and since then I have already asked you to meet me in person to sort out some of the issues I face here. My wife and I found some of the furniture very woeful when we first shifted here, but somehow we tried to manage it with patience. However, now its almost unbearable because my double bed is making some weird noise, and the cushion of the giant sofa in guest room is very shabby and totally ripped off. Moreover, the quaint glass dining table legs are loose and cracked. Therefore, I am concerned of my little daughter safety when we are not around.
I plea you, kindly send a carpenter at your earliest convenience, so that we can have a piece of mind. Thank you in anticipation.
Sincerely yours,
Irfan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...action regarding the miserable state of some of the furniture. As you know, I moved into...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ed you to meet me in person to sort out some of the issues I face here. My wife and I found...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...issues I face here. My wife and I found some of the furniture very woeful when we first shi...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you in anticipation. Sincerely yours, Irfan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61046511628 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53922047419 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697674418605 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.715406317 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164869769491 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592657145343 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499172417636 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124037937767 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287136133945 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.