Dear Mrs. Belish,
I am Anna Flo, your tenant staying in house number 5, Kingsley road, London. My intention to write this letter is to draw your attention towards the condition of some of the furniture piece in your apartment. Firstly, i am very much thankful for renting such a beautiful house in a short time, but however there are certain things that needs to be fixed and replaced which i am enlisting below.
The heater in the living area is broken and this makes the home very cold at night, so i want you to look into this and help in getting it repaired. As you are aware of the weather, i hope you would help us to do the required work as soon as possible. Another problem that we are facing is the garage shutter, it is not staying up, when we want to move our car. This is creating a lot of problem as some one hast to stand there holding it up till one moves the car.
I would really appreciate if you could help in making the required things right sooner, as it gets very difficult for us to adjust with these faulty things. I will be waiting for your reply.
Thank you
Yours Truely,
Anne Flo
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...your attention towards the condition of some of the furniture piece in your apartment. Firs...
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Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...iture piece in your apartment. Firstly, i am very much thankful for renting such ...
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Line 2, column 295, Rule ID: BUT_NEVERTHELESS[1]
Message: Use simply 'but'.
Suggestion: but
...such a beautiful house in a short time, but however there are certain things that needs to ...
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Line 2, column 374, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...at needs to be fixed and replaced which i am enlisting below. The heater in th...
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Line 4, column 88, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s makes the home very cold at night, so i want you to look into this and help in ...
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Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...aired. As you are aware of the weather, i hope you would help us to do the requir...
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Line 4, column 380, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
... want to move our car. This is creating a lot of problem as some one hast to stand there holding...
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Line 4, column 400, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...r. This is creating a lot of problem as some one hast to stand there holding it up till ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29716981132 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16127834059 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622641509434 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.9237717839 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228516437342 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843106607148 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0868480487521 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127279699596 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493471786629 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.