You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain what is wrong with the furniture
say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Mr. James,
I am tenant in one of your properties in Royal Avenue. I am writing to bring your attention to some furniture in substandard condition that you have specified in our rental agreement.
Me and my family have been living in 2/43 Royal Avenue for six months. We were excited when we moved this unit. We found that some furnitures and appliances were in defective conditions. The sofa sets have broken legs. They are unusable. Also, the cushion's colour has faded out. On top of that the refrigerator in the kitchen does not maintain the desired temperature. And cupboard door locks are missing. Overall, some of the furniture and stuff you have provided are in faulty conditions.
I request you to look into this matter urgently. When I signed the rental contract, you have promised to replace these some of the furniture. Six months have already elapsed, but nothing has been done. I expect your action on this as soon as possible for our living and well-being.
Yours Sincerely,
Omer
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tenanted'.
Suggestion: tenanted
Dear Mr. James, I am tenant in one of your properties in Royal Aven...
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Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...pboard door locks are missing. Overall, some of the furniture and stuff you have provided a...
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Line 4, column 119, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...act, you have promised to replace these some of the furniture. Six months have already elap...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85465116279 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59364238098 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9238628774 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.1875 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.75 16.8248392259 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8125 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204021587903 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059122703811 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066363079994 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143733476918 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634872909723 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.79 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.