You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture Write a letter to your landlord In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furnit

Dear Sir/Madam,

Seasonal greetings to you
My name is Arjun, Indian National and I came here last week to spend holidays with my daughter who is studying her master’s degree in Leads University. I am writing to inform you that sofa cum bud is not working well because of spring has broken or jammed and it is not possible to open to sit. This furniture was the one of the major attractions for me When I see this apartment thus, I can use it for both sleeping and sitting.
However, I request you to kindly either change the sofa as earliest or to arrange a technician who can fix the furniture and more important thing is that please come and check the problem if possible as building owner you are the best person to understand our situation.
I hope a fastest solution to this problem so that I can stay here for more than a month

Best Regards,

Arjun

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 8, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...on to understand our situation. I hope a fastest solution to this problem so tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, thus, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 714.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49056603774 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47864180613 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 16.3608247423 189% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.845756218 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.8 76.5299724578 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 16.8248392259 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 4.34317383033 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0903470908339 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043561565857 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295371532926 0.0603063233224 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.060675486096 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375771257787 0.0580467560999 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 8.37731958763 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 7.45979381443 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 8.54432989691 169% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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