You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.Task: Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements.1. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving.2. What type of rooms you would like.3. Ask them how much the weekend w

Dear Sir,

The purpose of this letter is to bring in to your attention that we would like to utilise rooms of your hotel for accommodation purposes at this weekend. However, we were looking for a hotel nearest to the seaside who offers direct access to the private beach. Luckily, we found your hotel best fits our requirements. Therefore, we have decided to book rooms in your hotel and would like to request for the arrangements in advance.

Furthermore, we would like to consume rooms for two adults and four children. Besides, expect our arrival on 12 September, Friday along with departure date would be 14 September, Sunday. I hope I have embellished all the details required to arrange our stay at your hotel.

On the contrary, I would like you to elaborate on your services, amenities, activities, events and entertainment. Possibly, I would like to ask regarding boasting is allowed or not.

I look forward to hearing from you soon regarding my concerns.

Yours Faithfully,
John

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, look, regarding, so, therefore, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 838.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01796407186 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83354406991 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62874251497 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3670452948 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1818181818 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1818181818 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268160175385 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967526612048 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430639692646 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144206128617 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461153316626 0.0580467560999 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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