You and your family have recently moved to an English-speaking country.
The person who lives in the apartment above you plays a musical instrument,
and the noise causes you and your family some problems.
Write a letter to this person. In your letter,
• introduce yourself and give details of the noise
• describe the problems it is causing you and your family
• suggest what action the person could take
Dear Mr John,
I am writing to kindly bring your attention to issue of noise coming from your apartment.
My family and I have just recently shifted to an apartment right below your own. However, due to this close proximity
we are well in hearing range of your drums practice session.
Normally, this would be of no concern, but the problem is that these sessions always used to take place when we are attempting to put our 2 young to bed between 7-8 pm. Not only this is causing the difficulties
for them to sleep but also causing stress for my wife and myself.
By no means am I suggesting you stop the practice session rather it would be a huge help if you could just move your practice by an hour or two?
Thank you for your understanding and please drop by if you would like to discussion person,
yours sincerely,
Sumit
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: CLOSE_SCRUTINY[1]
Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...ht below your own. However, due to this close proximity we are well in hearing range of your ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 211, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot only this is causing the difficulties for them to sleep but also causing stres...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 699.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56862745098 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39993022525 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699346405229 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 201.6 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 27.2366799499 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8571428571 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 4.34317383033 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345506472271 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148605275763 0.0766984524023 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.089242312728 0.0603063233224 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14282475139 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832788265842 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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