You and your friend are planning a picnic in the country side. Write:
• Which arrangements you have already done?
• Other activities that can be done
• How can your friend help with the arrangements?
Dear Sam,
It`s been so long since we last travelled together for a trip. I hope you are well! I`m writing about our next vacation to the rural area in England.
I have everything organized, as I collected several information about that area of England. When I browsed the map, I found many places to visit, and activities to be done. It has a large lake where we can practice our favorite hobbies, such as fishing and boat trip. The area is located beside a mountain and astonishing landscape, and the scene from above would be so inspiring and refreshing.
Recently, the council opened a new entertainment area, and it opens till late night. Therefore, I would recommend if we tried to catch it before closing. The area has also a small zoo with a lot of international animals where brought from Africa, we can book two tickets online if you are interested.
My care is a compact sedan type, and it won`t fit our luggage. I would therefore request that we go with your four-wheel drive car, as it will be more suitable for such picnic. It can also be used if we intended to drive up to the mountain.
Best wishes,
Ayoub
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 45, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some information'.
Suggestion: some information
...ve everything organized, as I collected several information about that area of England. When I brow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6862745098 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66468351864 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9551933639 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5384615385 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6923076923 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149389720104 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455121478171 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449585467534 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842867682059 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255442027939 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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