You and your friend booked theater tickets in advance. Apology to your friend as you can't make it to the theatre with him.
In the letter, you should:
• apologies
• explain what reasons you can’t make it
• give options what can be done with the ticket.
Dear Mat,
Hope you are doing well. Firstly I would like to apologize as I won’t be able to make it to the upcoming movie “Arctic” tomorrow as I have to travel for a business conference. Let me explain the situation in detail.
To elucidate a conference has come up at the last minute, therefore, I would need to travel to Japan. Although my company had decided not to participate in the event this year however later on company management decided to participate as they thought it would be ideal to launch new software products at the conference. As you are aware that I work as a product manager for new software products hence I would need to travel to support the launch of these products in the event.
Lastly, I would suggest cancelling our tickets as the tickets we bought are fully refundable without any cancellation charges. Otherwise, you can take my cousin to this movie as he too is anxiously waiting for the release of this movie.
Once again I apologize for any inconvenience caused.
Best wishes
Saud
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, lastly, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80555555556 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90535372148 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605555555556 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.561090144 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14468593267 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052150992036 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448698622139 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0905095790106 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538837236852 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.