Dear Friend,
I am writing this in reference to theater tickets which we booked to watch jungle book together during diwali season. Unfortunately, I just realize that, I got my IELTS exam just one day after diwali. Firstly, I apologies, putting you in such awkward situation because of my immaturity. As you aware of the fact that, I am planning to go abroad to complete my post graduate in Data Science for my future endeavors.
In conclusion, I have organised a plan not to spoil your diwali. Therefore, I have invited your mom to Bangalore and I have already explain the entire situation to her. Firstly she blessed me for my exam and agreed to come here, so that she can watch the jungle book with you and can lighten your day with full of joy and happiness. And I can also taster her yummy food during the grand day if you permit me!
Now this is right time to accept my apology. I promise to you that, I won't repeat such mistakes in life at least not with you!
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'explained'.
Suggestion: explained
...our mom to Bangalore and I have already explain the entire situation to her. Firstly sh...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mistakes in life at least not with you!
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, at least, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43333333333 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44409088352 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627777777778 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.0324926918 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265575050013 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993641604145 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719948555557 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164651919181 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502841005373 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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