Dear Manager,
I am writing this letter to express my disappointment towards the service given by your company. I moved from North Kolkata to South Kolkata last Friday evening. Hence, I'he used your packer's and mover's service to shift all my household items.
I am really unhappy with the service. Because, There are many goods and items are broken during the transfer. My television screen has been scratched and I'm unable to start the operation. Mirror and more number of glasses are fully broken. My mother got an injury while opening the glass frames. I believe a poor packaging has been done by the team. We observed that your department only uses a lower quality plastics to pack all the stuffs instead a professional covers.
I would recommend your team to work professionally while working for any client without a single damage. I would like to suggest your team to plan their work in a proper manner while packing the household's products. And Ask them to use the best quality packing covers available in the market. So that you'll secure your brand and can achieve more clients instead complaining one.
Hope you will take the feedback in a positive way!
Many Thanks,
Shahin
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...elevision screen has been scratched and Im unable to start the operation. Mirror a...
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Line 7, column 89, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'single damage'.
Suggestion: single damage
...ly while working for any client without a single damage. I would like to suggest your team to p...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...to suggest your team to plan their work in a proper manner while packing the households products. ...
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Line 7, column 302, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...covers available in the market. So that youll secure your brand and can achieve more ...
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Line 9, column 33, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...one. Hope you will take the feedback in a positive way! Many Thanks, Shahin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91625615764 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48493727227 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689655172414 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.0235070064 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.5333333333 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5333333333 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86666666667 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153265428304 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432471456797 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291389211222 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870987289789 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285645837518 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.