You and your neighbour have noticed that the rubbish collection services where you live have recently been quite bad. Write a letter to local council. In your letter explain,
what you have recently experienced
Explain what the neighbours have recently experienced and
Ask what action will be taken to improve the service.
Dear Sir\Madam,
I am a resident of Rakesh colony, sector 31, Faridabad, Haryana and our area comes under your council. The purpose of penning down this letter is regarding the inappropiate service provided by rubbish collection unit in our location, its quite bad.
initially the unit used to collect rubbish on door to door basis, me and my neighbor who are mostly working class people were happy, but from last three months no service boy appeared because of this we started to collect the dump in dump container that is established around the corner of the area and now its also full, we were expecting this dump to be removed in duration of three months but its still there. Now the pile is so big that it is dangerous in many factors.
Smell around the area is unbearable and now a home of several little insects, this situation is very unbearable.
children park is just in front of this container who are more vulnerable to several diseases and could get injured due to this huge pile while playing around. my neighbor tried to reach the office of this rubbish collection office and complained about this matter, they asked us to wait for a week as they do not have any workforce, after a week when no resolution was there I visited the office to ask about what action they took, they told me that people in area need to pay extra for this particular service and argued with me when I asked about the cost.
This is unbearable situation as their demand is illegal, on the other hand my neighbor's parents were Hospitalized and we can blame carelessness of this unit our children now and then having viral. Its a request to please look into this matter as soon as possible.
In hope of some optimistic response and action from your side.
Your sincerely,
abc
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Initially
...unit in our location, its quite bad. initially the unit used to collect rubbish on doo...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Children
...ts, this situation is very unbearable. children park is just in front of this container...
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Line 14, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...to this huge pile while playing around. my neighbor tried to reach the office of t...
^^
Line 14, column 542, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... service and argued with me when I asked about the cost. This is unbearable si...
^^
Line 16, column 199, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...ur children now and then having viral. Its a request to please look into this matt...
^^^
Line 18, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... In hope of some optimistic response and action from your side. Your sincerely...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, regarding, so, still, then, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.48453608247 240% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 26.3917525773 178% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1767.0 937.175257732 189% => OK
No of words: 367.0 206.0 178% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81471389646 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 3.78020617076 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45584668646 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 127.690721649 154% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536784741144 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 544.5 290.88556701 187% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 116.728120355 44.8134815571 260% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 126.214285714 76.5299724578 165% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2142857143 16.8248392259 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.29896907216 233% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339388249801 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138240320581 0.0766984524023 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.215588133427 0.0603063233224 357% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21734451015 0.12726935374 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.275992069476 0.0580467560999 475% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 70.7449484536 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 7.45979381443 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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