You are about to star social-meeting in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part. Write a letter to the editor of local newspaper requesting him to publish information about this:•What activities you have to planned•Wh

Essay topics:

You are about to star social-meeting in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part. Write a letter to the editor of local newspaper requesting him to publish information about this:
• What activities you have to planned
• When the first meeting takes place and where

Dear Sir,

I am a resident of classic residency in gurugram Sector 56 and need your help in publishing information about an upcoming social event in our society.

We are planning to start a fortnightly social meeting for the residents of all neighboring societies. this will ensure that people from various nationalities working and residing in gurugram get to know each other and develop a rapport irrespective of their nationalities.

We are planning to initiate the meeting on 5th of July from 11 am to 1 pm i.e., next Sunday at the Community Center of classic residency. We have formed a group to organize this meet-up and have planned a few activities. It will start with a warm-up round to familiarize the residents, followed by a few games for kids and a small brunch.

We would highly appreciate your favor in helping us in informing the neighboring occupants about the get-together in time.
Best,
Anil Sharma

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...residents of all neighboring societies. this will ensure that people from various na...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 782.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01282051282 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97952138204 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.673076923077 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4800780562 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.75 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 4.34317383033 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16921283582 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667511777489 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431437050033 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0969716891981 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167867623151 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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