You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.Write a letter to formal teacher. In your letter :Give detail of the job Explain why it is important to you Suggest what information your teacher could out in the reference.

Dear Dr Mark,

I am Thomas X one of your former students in the V high school in Tehran by 2009. I am writing this letter with regard to requirement of a reference letter in order to apply for a job.

I tend to work in a car factory that is located at the suburb of the city. Although it is hard to commute their every day, the designing site that is my favorite department, takes advantage of modern and sophisticated laboratory equipment. As you May remember, my base field of study was car body designing, so I am really fond of this job. In addition, the salary is indeed satisfactory, and I would be thoroughly fulfilled.

On the other hand, I am going to get married the following year with my fiance. Therefore, it would viably be wise if I could secure an appropriate occupation regarding support of my family subsequently. Not only would it guarantee my marriage, but it would also reinforce my adeptness in my beloved major.

I really appreciate if you express your satisfaction about me. Since my scores manifested the reality, there were so high. Thus, please, mention that I would be adequate capable of carrying out my project properly. Last but not least, I have passed six month computer-aided design training in one of the prominent institute of the city.
Thank you very much for your consideration and understanding.
Yours faithfully
Thomas X

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... letter in order to apply for a job. I tend to work in a car factory that is l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, regarding, so, therefore, thus, in addition, with regard to, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77824267782 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95020917535 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644351464435 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5662266777 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1333333333 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9333333333 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149593953674 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526890641368 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718659631352 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975821420511 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765731285193 0.0580467560999 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 41.2886597938 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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