You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:
Give details of the job
Explain why it is important to you
Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference.
Dear Mr Brown,
I am your old student as you taught me Unix when I was doing BCA. I am writing this letter to request you for taking a reference letter from you.
I have recently completed master in computer application from Punjab Agriculture University. now I am searching for job and last week ,I noticed a job of same college in which you are teaching now, which was advertised in turbune newspaper. There are two vacancies in computer science department of assistant professor .
I am so passionate to do job in this college because of its reputation in whole city, secondly I need of it very urgently due to the personal problems as my we have made a house by taking loan so my father has not enough money for my further study as I want to do PhD while doing job simunteanously.
Therefore I want your reference letter so that I get job more easily as you know, nowadays reference is very imperative for getting job. so I would be grateful if u could send me your reference letter in which you have to include some details such as your full name, designation, whole experience ,phone number, email as well as yours view about myself.
I hope you will understand my problem and sent me a reference letter.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience
yours sincerely,
Harwinderjit kaur
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...taking a reference letter from you. I have recently completed master in comp...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ing a reference letter from you. I have recently completed master in compu...
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Line 6, column 94, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Now
...ion from Punjab Agriculture University. now I am searching for job and last week ,I...
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Line 6, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...now I am searching for job and last week ,I noticed a job of same college in whic...
^^
Line 6, column 151, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g for job and last week ,I noticed a job of same college in which you are teachin...
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Line 6, column 320, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...cience department of assistant professor . I am so passionate to do job in thi...
^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... PhD while doing job simunteanously. Therefore I want your reference letter so that I ...
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Line 10, column 138, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...nce is very imperative for getting job. so I would be grateful if u could send me...
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Line 10, column 140, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e is very imperative for getting job. so I would be grateful if u could send me y...
^^
Line 10, column 298, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...full name, designation, whole experience ,phone number, email as well as yours vie...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, such as, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68510638298 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76539785724 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625531914894 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.6033993516 44.8134815571 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.1 76.5299724578 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 16.8248392259 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 4.34317383033 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254663205456 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10527146323 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789394163602 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129735395078 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0789540906635 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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