ou are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:
give details of the job
explain why it is important to you
suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference
Dear Dr.Cotton,
I am writing to request a reference letter from you as I am applying for a position with a company I always dreamed of working.
The title of the position is Manufacturing Quality Engineer and it is with a leading car manufacturer, Fiat Chrysler Automobiles. The job involves mainly fixing Quality related problems of general assembly, therefore, the work would be in rotating shifts and most of the time would be spent on shop floor.
I have been always passionate about automobiles and this will be perfect start to my professional career. Moreover, I will be graduating in coming two months, after graduation I will have to start paying installments of student loan, hence, it is essential for me to seize this opportunity before graduation.
As I have conducted a research under your supervision during my bachelor studies, I would like to request you to mention about my research project on modern generation fuels used in automobiles. In addition, few words about my skills and character would be highly appreciated.
Hopefully, this reference letter would definitely make my application noticeable.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
Nilesh Shah
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Cotton
Dear Dr.Cotton, I am writing to request a reference...
^^^^^^
Line 8, column 21, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...fore graduation. As I have conducted a research under your supervision during my bachel...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31088082902 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10664864537 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621761658031 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9555001704 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 76.5299724578 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122718993119 0.216113520407 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0556826686271 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057024145788 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768952903664 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620268855479 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 8.71597938144 155% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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