On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
• describe the item you lost
• explain how you lost it
• tell the insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inform you that I would like to make a claim for a lost Ipad using my travel insurance policy. My insurance policy number is G214450.
I had a great stay at the hotel Taj during my vacation last week, from 21st March to 24th of March. I had my Ipad with me all the time. It was made by apple, Ipad 4G, 12 inches, and was black in color. It also had solid black casing to protect it from shocks and water. It was fairly new and bought at Rs.40000.
I remember using it for the last time when I was reading online book in the hotel lobby. At that time, I received a call on my cellphone but due to poor connection in the lobby, I stepped outside. I believe I forgot it on the couch while going out to attend a call. I have already informed hotel management regarding this incident but I haven’t heard from them in last few days.
As my electronic devices are protected under travel insurance I would like to make a claim for it. Therefore, please send me information about the guidelines of making a claim. You can also email me or call me to discuss the details. I am expecting a quicker response from you to proceed further.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Thank you.
Yours faithfully,
Nilesh Shah
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to inform you that I would ...
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Line 4, column 187, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
...e by apple, Ipad 4G, 12 inches, and was black in color. It also had solid black casing to prot...
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Line 4, column 271, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ng to protect it from shocks and water. It was fairly new and bought at Rs.40000. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as fairly new and bought at Rs.40000. I remember using it for the last time wh...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... response from you to proceed further. I am looking forward to hearing from you...
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Line 10, column 47, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thank
...ooking forward to hearing from you soon.Thank you. Yours faithfully, N...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to hearing from you soon.Thank you. Yours faithfully, Nilesh Shah
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hank you. Yours faithfully, Nilesh Shah
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, regarding, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36440677966 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43626012596 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601694915254 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.13402061856 175% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9752733133 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5882352941 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8823529412 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150853808523 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046222641664 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630922633963 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103252779606 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084112016702 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.