Some people believe that if people are allowed to work after the age of 60, it will cause some problems. Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that if employees are permitted to continue working past the age of 60, it may create problems in future. This essay completely disagrees with the statement above as it believes that having senior people in the team is always beneficial. The essay will discuss firstly, the advantages of having elderly people in the team and secondly, how continuation of work helps elderly people.
To begin with, having knowledgeable old people working along with fresh graduates is a powerful combination that many companies around the world trying to incorporate in their organisations. The key benefit is the rapid development of new generation employees as they can quickly learn and get onto the speed by shadowing experienced veteran workers. This senior workers usually posses huge amount of knowledge, skills, and understanding, therefore, letting them go is a major loss to the company. Pairing them with unfamiliar trainees or graduates can transfer valuable information. For example, I was paired with a veteran engineer in my first job, who taught me all the important tools to solve a problem on the shop floor; as a result, I was able to handle projects in no time.
Another point to consider is that it is highly beneficial for people past 60 to continue working as they can enjoy a source of income. The principal advantage is that they don’t have to rely on their children or become a burden on their family. In few cases, after retirement senior citizens relocate themselves to live with their kids as they can’t afford rising cost of living. As they have no work to do, they get utterly bored and, in addition, they can’t even meet their old local friends to kill the boredom. Therefore, I believe elderly people should continue working, for instance, a survey from the Times newspaper mentioned senior citizen who chose to work past 60 were found more content with their lives.
In conclusion, working past 60 is actually beneficial not only for the corporation but also for the senior people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to rise'.
Suggestion: to rise
...th their kids as they can't afford rising cost of living. As they have no work to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1701.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0325443787 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74507270939 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585798816568 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3785800952 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15665458743 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576318534167 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522552931217 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100922097483 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0627041249619 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.