Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people prefer to be employed in a single corporation until they retire, while others believe that working with multiple employers is beneficial. This essay agrees that having work experience from several companies is advantageous. The essay will discuss first, disadvantages of a single employer and then, mention multiple employers builds better career.
To begin with, those who prefer to continue working with the same employer throughout their career might get occasional promotions and better pension plan after they retire because of their loyalty. However, they miss out the experience of learning different work cultures, exposure to versatile methodologies, and problem solving approaches followed in various organisations. When people work with the same company their knowledge and learning gets limited as time passes. Therefore, development of their skills and professional network becomes confined. For example, according to the Times newspaper survey, 70% of the Senior Managers found inefficient in using modern computer tools as their organisations never trained them in using modern tools.
On the other hand, working with several organisations paves a successful career path as every organisation offers something new to learn, which is essential in building a strong foundation of knowledge. Many times it involves moving to different countries, working with people of different culture and background. This not only develops person’s communication skills but also ability to adapt to new work environment and challenges. These are a must have factors for the strong leadership positions. For example, according to the Time magazine, recent trend is to fill the Director position with a person who has overseas work experience.
In conclusion, it is suggested to work with multiple companies to grow professionally as well as personally. However, many people may choose to settle down with one employer because of the superior retirement fund.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.7027027027 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97787525794 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611486486486 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0668730645 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7333333333 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27127519332 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943568109143 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440586184444 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158453772681 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592953260405 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.78 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.