Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge. Write at least 250 words
A large number of cities in the world have witnessed increasing youth crime at an alarming rate. The essay will discuss firstly, financial hardship and lack of attention from parents are key reasons for this problem and then will suggest, support for families and caring family are the effective measures.
It is natural for kids to compare themselves with their friends, however, when they realize that their friends are richer and financially more stable than them, they start to look for wrong ways to bridge the gap. These kids initially start with petty crimes such as stealing to fulfill their daily expenses, but with the passage of time, they get involved in deeper and deeper into life of a crime. Another important reason is lack of attention of parents. Many parents are not aware of kid’s friends circle and social activities. According to The Times, teenage drinking problems are majorly found in nuclear families where child is not looked after well by parents.
The principal solution for the teenage crimes resulting from poverty is to provide support to the families. Community can step forward and share expenses of the education and food of the local underprivileged kids, these will reduce some of the financial burden from those families and might save a child from dropping out of school and going astray. Another solution to ensure children are on right path is to have caring family, it can be very advantageous in the overall development of children. It develops critical thinking and builds confidence, which ensures that kids are less likely to break the trust of their parents. For instance, a survey of high school students reported that 87% students did not involve in underage drinking because they had promised their parents.
In conclusion, youth crime is on the verge around the world, but it can be controlled with the help of strong family relationships and community support.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
A large number of cities in the world have witnessed incr...
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Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...underprivileged kids, these will reduce some of the financial burden from those families an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08517350158 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51585939746 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586750788644 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6956203338 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16627661617 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578849290881 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537608081379 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113004693118 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654838012732 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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