You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
- thank your friend for the holiday
- explain that you left your wallet in their house
- give them instructions on how to send it back to you
Dear Santosh,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. Although it’s such a short time we saw each other, it feels much longer.
Thank you so much for not only a memorable holiday but also for your great company. I really enjoyed visiting Chicago and your family. I have never witnessed such a beautiful city and welcoming people. I am already missing the meals you cooked for me, it was delicious and celestial.
After getting back home, I realized that I forgot my wallet in the cupboard of guest room. While packing my clothes, I intentionally put it out instead putting it in the suitcase. I thought I might need some money to fill up the gas tank while driving back. However, after partying hard in the night before my departure, I completely forgot to collect my wallet in the morning.
I am very sorry but I must ask you to please mail my wallet to my home address as soon as you can. All of my credit cards are in it and I need to pay few important bills. I would recommend you to use Fedex overnight shipment service as it is the quickest one. Feel free to use cash from my wallet to pay for the shipment.
I’m so sorry for being such a scatterbrain and inconveniencing to you.
Keep in touch and write me back.
Nilesh
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... a beautiful city and welcoming people. I am already missing the meals you cooked...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 232.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46551724138 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49517965726 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6587621025 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.9411764706 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6470588235 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.76470588235 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271871593729 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822618505359 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815667228937 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12388276279 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0910957982006 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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