Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that building number of sports centers is a better approach to improve fitness of people, while other are opposed to this view and believe that alternative approach is needed. This essay will argue that sports centers help to some people, however, encouraging healthy lifestyle through media is better is solution to improve community health.
Nowadays there are number of sports of centers and gyms available in the cities, which few young students and professionals use to build stamina or to develop endurance through hardcore training. These people are highly motivated who try to manage their workout timings in coordination with their school or work schedules to remain regular. The principal benefit is to remain fit and healthy and the minor is socialising. Considering popularity among youth, The Municipal Corporation of my city have built 2 swimming pools, and 3 gyms in last 3 years. I believe this is certainly positive development to keep community healthy.
On the other hand, many people are not motivated to go to the gym or to play sports similar to young people, therefore, in order to encourage healthy lifestyle among the majority, media should be used. TV shows can effectively address the most common health issue, obesity. The audience can be educated and encouraged to adopt healthy way of life by broadcasting interviews of doctors mentioning importance of regular exercising and side effects of excessive junk food. To make a point, a famous documentary, ‘Fat to Fit’, successfully demonstrated it is absolutely possible to eliminate obesity by regular exercise and healthy diet.
In conclusion, the optimal way to address healthy lifestyle is through the television media as compared to sports facilities, as it is easier to educate people by showing powerful speeches and life transition videos.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'sport'.
Suggestion: sport
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3231292517 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87653163784 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595238095238 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3225015939 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.416666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162454791208 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550172377335 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445008845004 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0972693543102 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447203437592 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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