You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:
give details of the job
explain why it is important to you
suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference
Dear sir
I am writing this letter to seek an academic reference letter for my new job. Last week I applied full-time job for the junior computer software developer in Deloitte and got selected. I am the first student from the college who is selected in Deloitte and It is one of the biggest organizations in Canada.
Moreover, working under Deloitte is the first step toward achieving my career goal and I am happy to have the matching qualifications required for the job but before the interview process, the Company required an academic reference letter. I kindly requested you to please provide me a reference letter and add some of my academic achievements and my last summer research in the letter. Furthermore, you can add my dedication towards my studies and my positive attitude to face any kind of challenge. In addition, my volunteer working hours which I did during my summer breaks.
Many thanks to you in advance.
your faithfully
sim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
... Many thanks to you in advance. your faithfully sim
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94444444444 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83333333333 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4342969318 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23628572648 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101605237756 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875969967793 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14805340501 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053744654318 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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