You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference.
Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter:
Give details of the job
Explain why it is important to you
Suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference
Respected Sir,
With due respect, I would like to state that I am a former student of your reputed university, University of Nottingham. I was a student of the Mechanical engineering department from 2012-2016. After completing my undergraduate, I went on to do a coursework Masters degree at Monash University, Australia.
Recently, I have applied for a job at Deloitte International Ltd., one of the most successful multinational companies in Australia. They value high-caliber students with good leadership skill and excellent in managing people. As you might remember, I was the president of our student body association, Institution of Mechanical Engineers, UNMC. Furthermore, I also served as the student representative of all Engineering students and coordinated between the department and student. I was lucky to have you as a supervisor during that time, providing me the guidance and assistance which I needed.
Therefore, having mentioned the circumstances above, I would like to request you if you could be kind enough to write a reference letter for me, highlighting my key attributors of leadership and facilitator. Furthermore, you could provide any personal opinion of me, since I believe you have great idea of some of my potential, which the company might find to be of extra value. I ask for this kindness and hope that you could email it to me or contact me directly : +8801799581996. I await eagerly for your reply and thank you once again for taking your valuable time to peruse through this letter and assist me in obtaining this job.
Yours truthfully
Tahmeed Rahman
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...tor. Furthermore, you could provide any personal opinion of me, since I believe you have great i...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 937.175257732 144% => OK
No of words: 257.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2373540856 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27215353593 2.54303337028 129% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 127.690721649 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610894941634 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0245067978 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.538461538 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229336388625 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720188884173 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741286743193 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125570700607 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102371211538 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.