You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter, give details of the job, explain why it is important to you, suggest that information your teacher could put in the reference.

Dear Ms. Suchitra,

I am writing this letter to you regarding asking for a favor. Recently, I have attended an interview as a Software Developer in Optum Global Solutions in Hyderabad. All of my rounds have been successfully completed. However, to receive an employment offer they wanted me provide a reference letter from a lecturer in my college. As you were my head of the department, I found you are the best person to write. This reference is crucial for me to secure an employment in this organization. This particular letter is to analyze my conduct in my education.

Please write a note that includes my details such as Name, Stream, College, Passed out year, and conduct. These facts are essential as they would evaluate my background based on what you provide. I hope you understand the criticality of this process.

Please email me if you need further details. I look forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,
Mr. Rakesh Sharma

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, regarding, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.975 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84360576557 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.66875 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2586136896 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.2307692308 76.5299724578 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3076923077 16.8248392259 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15384615385 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189737257866 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0689433946104 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493416930364 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121112216501 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273327605563 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.66 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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