You are bored in your current job but you enjoy working for your company. You think you would be happier if you moved to a different department in the same company.
Write a letter to your employer. In the letter
ask to be moved to a position in another department
explain how you feel about your current position and your career
say why you think changing your job would be good for you and the company
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear …………………
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Sir,
My name is Harpal Singh and I work as a software engineer in the product engineering department. I am writing this letter to request you to move me to the artificial intelligence department.
I am fulfilling my roles and responsibilities in my current job, but I am not satisfied with growth opportunities available in this job. This is because my current work mainly involves repetitive work and there is no scope innovation in this place.
There are multiple reasons for this ask. Firstly, I have good earlier experience in artificial intelligence, therefore this movement will not only help me build on that experience, but also will add a good asset to that department. Additionally, since I have been actively following up the recent trends in the field of artificial intelligence, I will not need any more training for the job.
So I kindly request you to move me to the artificial intelligence department.
Yours Faithfully,
Harpal Singh
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10691823899 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23594532009 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584905660377 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1832050025 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2222222222 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156979401763 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0756234452701 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673814806596 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102478739975 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059435681173 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.