Dear Mr. Robson,
I am writing this letter to express my concern about moving to a new position in the Financial department.
I have thoroughly enjoyed my three years here. I have also gained lots of experience from my colleagues and my supervisor in the Accounting department which help me in my career as an Accountant. During these times, I have learned not only technical skills but also soft skills such as dealing with customers and problem-solving skills.
However, I feel that this is the time for me to broaden my horizon in the financial field, which now becomes my ultimate ambition. Because I have been studying the ACCA qualification which provides knowledge in accounting, financial, and auditing perspective, I am confident that I have abilities and reponsilities to work in a different sector. Finally, our company is in a shortage of full-time workers in this department, my appointment would probably solve this issue.
I sincerely appreciate your taking the time and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Mai Nguyen.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, look, so, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 892.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12643678161 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05846496686 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5112568766 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1111111111 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 4.34317383033 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128871663715 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566477212311 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563953839697 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895185410879 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640269897014 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 8.71597938144 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.