You are currently running a course and have a part-time job. Your boss suggested that you leave your course and work full time. Write a letter to your boss.
In the letter, you should:
tell him/her your decision
explain the reason for your decision.
Dear Sir:
It is a great news for me that you are hoping to see me working at your office as a full time employee. I am pretty much excited about your offer as it has an attractive package. However, I might not be able to continue as a full time employee as I do have some unfinished exam.
I am currently at the last part of the Financial Analytics Course. I am doing well in this course. As I do have a finance background and I am working in your organization as a part time Investment Analytic thus this course is helping me to do well in my career. You might notice that this course is helping to improve my depth of knowledge and teaching me the practical implications. This is beneficial for your organization too. After completing this course I will be able to continue as a full time employee in your office.
This current situation is already known to you. It is thus up to you if you want me to continue as a part time employee and let me complete my course and be beneficial to your company or else.
I am so much grateful that you are considering my opinions. I am looking forward to get reply from you.
Yours faithfully,
Rafiur Rahman
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 7, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'great news'.
Suggestion: great news
Dear Sir: It is a great news for me that you are hoping to see me wo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 85, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...g to see me working at your office as a full time employee. I am pretty much excited abou...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...r, I might not be able to continue as a full time employee as I do have some unfinished e...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... I am working in your organization as a part time Investment Analytic thus this course is...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 492, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... course I will be able to continue as a full time employee in your office. This current...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 102, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... to you if you want me to continue as a part time employee and let me complete my course ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to getting'.
Suggestion: to getting
...ering my opinions. I am looking forward to get reply from you. Yours faithfully, Ra...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... you. Yours faithfully, Rafiur Rahman
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32110091743 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67216698409 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495412844037 0.622605031667 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7901548746 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2857142857 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.35714285714 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349543849845 0.216113520407 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13085586554 0.0766984524023 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075591211513 0.0603063233224 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220429916356 0.12726935374 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754523257253 0.0580467560999 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.