You are disturbed by the rubbish and litter problem in your area and street.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
Describe the situation
Inform them about the possible consequences
Give some suggestions to solve the problems.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Anna Ala, one of the resident of Forest St. Tacloban City. I am writing to complain about the pile of garbage in the corner of forest and flower street. It is ruining the view of our place because it is stuck there for almost a week before the truck of garbage collector gets it.
This incident has been going on for a month already. This creates a manifold of problem. Such as bad smell in the area and pieces of trash everywhere. In addition, some children are playing on the site where the garbage are piled. Furthermore, a lot of mosquitoes and flies are observed by all residents along the street. This is already alarming since it will lead to a lot of illnesses especially to the vulnerable age group
As a concern citizen, I would like to have this issue be tackled as soon as possible. I would like to suggest that the garbage collector be in our area twice or thrice a week. Moreover, it is a better idea to put big containers for proper segregation of rubbish.
I hope my suggestions are right for the issue. I am looking forward to have this resolved.
Sincerely yours,
Anna Ala
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Anna Ala, one of the resident of Fo...
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...e truck of garbage collector gets it. This incident has been going on for a mo...
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...s especially to the vulnerable age group As a concern citizen, I would like to ha...
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...rs for proper segregation of rubbish. I hope my suggestions are right for the ...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to having'.
Suggestion: to having
...ght for the issue. I am looking forward to have this resolved. Sincerely yours, A...
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...have this resolved. Sincerely yours, Anna Ala
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.49268292683 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55609756098 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4064596163 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.7857142857 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0701126682024 0.216113520407 32% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0250191076461 0.0766984524023 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0234995778525 0.0603063233224 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0399953286328 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0109268091049 0.0580467560999 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.17 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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