Immigration has a major impact on the society.
What are the main reasons of immigration?
To what consequences can it lead?
At present, it is undeniable that a lot of people are dreaming to migrate in first world countries. This seem a better idea for some. However, at point this will have a good and bad impact to where the people came from and to where they plan to go.
There are various reasons why people decide to settle in a different country. Mostly, they think that the country they have chosen will make their lives better and will help to sustain their needs and wants. For instance, internationally known companies entice some skilled workers to work for them in exchange to permanent residency. The chance to bring one's family to a wealthy country, is an extra point to accept the offer. Thus, higher pay is also an essential reason. In addition, the benefit of a free education and healthcare to whole family is somehow a great deal to pursue on getting a residency in other country.
This wide array of awesome benefits is not felt in other third world country such as Philippines. Probably if someone came from a rich family, migrating will never be one of the option. However, migrating will lead to some third world country to lose some of the best employees and negative people from where you decided to migrate will think that their job are taken over by different nationalities. This leads to rampant bullying and ugly treatment of locals to other immigrants. Consequently, the most that will be affected of this are the children.
In conclusion, migrating to other country is beneficial to other families who seeks better future. Deciding on this kind of matter should be discussed carefully and benefits should always outweighs the negative outcomes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, so, third, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85159010601 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57959242798 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56183745583 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1088019012 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8125 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6875 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0315777594469 0.244688304435 13% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.012114891432 0.084324248473 14% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0189380060074 0.0667982634062 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0180230367771 0.151304729494 12% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106839762278 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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