You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation, and cost.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Madam,
I am anna ala. A Head nurse in one of the prestigious hospital in our Municipality. I am writing to know more about the seminar on "Nursing of New Generation" that will be held on Singapore. Our Chief nurse chose me to attend this event and I need detailed information for me to give it to our human resource department for documentation.
Firstly, is it already confirmed that the dates will be from December 10 to 12, 2018? Will there be a lot of speakers that will talk about the topic? Furthermore, I want to know also if there will be return demonstrations and a certificate that will be given right after the program.
In addition to my curiosity with the seminar, if it is not too much to ask, will the accommodation be included on the total registration fees? if it is exclusive, I hope that there will be a near budget type hostel where the participants can stay for the entire duration of the seminar.
I will wait for your response to my queries at your convenient time.
Sincerely yours,
Anna ala
Comments
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This is very helpful. I hope that this will be my score during the actual test.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Madam, I am anna ala. A Head nurse in one of th...
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...esource department for documentation. Firstly, is it already confirmed that th...
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... will be given right after the program. In addition to my curiosity with the sem...
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...ncluded on the total registration fees? if it is exclusive, I hope that there will...
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...for the entire duration of the seminar. I will wait for your response to my quer...
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... to my queries at your convenient time. Sincerely yours, Anna ala
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...our convenient time. Sincerely yours, Anna ala
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58602150538 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00931705403 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4527511573 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5454545455 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0949866421264 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335049091364 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035731413988 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0626489521995 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372296864715 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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