You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

Essay topics:

You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.

Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding

the dates,

program,

accommodation and cost.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you with regards to the work related seminar that I would like to attend in your company.

My name is tomasz zawadzki and I have been working for Telecom for 10 years. I have found your advertise in Sydney Morning Herald newspaper. I am very interested in your conference that you are going to organize. However, I could not see any details about the date, program or cost.

As I am extremely busy person I would like to know what is the day of the meeting and how long it may take? Moreover, I need to know whole schedule of the conference, it will allow me to prepare myself for the event. In addition, I would like to ask about the accomodation. Do you organize some kind of places to stay overnight for people which coming from other states. And last but not least how much is the cost of the symposium.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Your faithfully,

tomasz zawadzki

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, may, moreover, so, in addition, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47953216374 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42707672157 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637426900585 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1408905727 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.8333333333 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254920736385 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758168231305 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686814870908 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152012158376 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088795428739 0.0580467560999 153% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.11 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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