Children today are too dependent on computers and electronic entertainment. It would be better for them to be outside playing sports and taking part in more traditional pastimes than spending all day indoors.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In today’s world kinds have more options to enjoy their free time than in the past. Most of them choose to enjoy their time in front of television or playing games on computer. However, it is recommended that they should participate in outdoor activities to develop their body and brain appropriate. I strongly agree with this view and in this essay, I will support my stand and provide relevant examples and arguments.
It is often claimed that computers and electronic devices are extremely addictive, especially for the young people. Many medical studies have proven that mobile games are making children lazy and affecting their overall development. Therefore, parents should encourage their kids to do some outdoor activities. It is well known fact that sports have positive influence on human body not only in young age such as increase stamina level, reduce level of stress. Moreover, team sport games such as football or baseball can teach children team work and strategic thinking. In addition, siting in one place for a long time for example playing video game may have bad impact on human body and may cause back pain or other diseases. Thus, it is evident that sports and other physical activities plays a significant role in life.
In conclusion, I believe that every invention in our world is for people and everything can be use in smart way to provide us plenty of pleasure and happiness even video games or computer. Parents are responsible for their kids and they should encourage them to have more diverse hobbies.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01556420233 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58015678628 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610894941634 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8384208856 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1538461538 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92307692308 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154126315951 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0514761224425 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268582014406 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100376649765 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00646553585614 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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