you have been studying French for one semester at university, but have decided to change your language course to English. Write a letter to the
Dean of studies, Professor Andrews
-explain why you wish to change your course of studies
-ask if it is possible to transfer your fees for the rest of the year without paying additional costs
Dear Professor Andrews,
I am writing to you with regards to a french course that I am attending at the Business Bridge College in Sydney. after one semester I feel as if I was not successful in it and consequently decide to change my course to english.
my name is tomasz zawadzki and I have studied french for one semester. Unfortunately, after a few sessiomns I realized that this class was not that I was expecting all the grammar and vocabulary were overhelming. Moreover, the course roster is colliding with my work. So I wonder if it is possible for me to change the course to english.
I have a few questuons about this transfer. Firstly, I need to know if it is doable to transfer the tuition fee that I paid at the time of registration for english course. Secondly, I wonder is there any other charges that I should pay?
Thank for your consideration and I am looking forwar to your anwer.
Your Sincerely,
tomasz zawadzki
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...rwar to your anwer. Your Sincerely, tomasz zawadzki
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 793.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72023809524 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84511356571 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7427131602 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0909090909 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341297016007 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111708834167 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806493540708 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14688171571 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813803869715 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.