You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.
Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. In your letter
*let them know when you will be arriving and leaving
*let them know what type of rooms you would like and ask them how much the weekend will cost
*enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you with regards to the accommodation that you have in your offer.
My family and I are organizing vacation in Gold Coast and we found your hotel as the most interesting place to stay for our travel. We are planning to arrive in Monday 21th of January and left two weeks after, so we want to stay 14 nights in total. We are big sizes family so we will need two or three rooms. The first should be with queen or king size bed and must be en suite. Another rooms, must have 6 separates beds and at least one bathroom each room, these rooms will be for our kids. Please send me the details about the rooms and the estimate price for them.
Moreover, I would like to ask what kind of entertainments your hotel offers I have seen on the website that you have a swimming pool and casino inside, I am wondering in what hours their operating?
Besides, what kind of activities have to offer surrounding area, because as a families we are really enjoying bush walking and camping.
Kindly thankful for the advices.
I am look forward to hearing from you.
Your faithful,
Tomasz Zawadzki
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 77, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a family' or simply 'families'?
Suggestion: a family; families
...e to offer surrounding area, because as a families we are really enjoying bush walking and...
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Line 25, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to hearing from you. Your faithful, Tomasz Zawadzki
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, look, moreover, really, so, at least, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 942.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55072463768 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34979341444 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642512077295 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.846034899 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229880482495 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746255188785 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499018600246 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101776679244 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0682269805471 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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