You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house.
Write a letter to you friend. In your letter
-tell him that you left the coat
-tell him what the coat looks like, where you think you left it and what was inside it
-make some suggestions about how to get the coat back
Hello David,
I am writing to you with regards, my last visit at you place.
I would like to thank you for inviting me to you house to celebrating your birthday and new year event.
However, I left my coat at your place and I need it urgent back. The coat is brown color with red buttons and two pockets on both sides. Inside the coat I left my belongings such as work keys, personal identification, work access card and my old watch. I think the coat I left on a stool in the kitchen next to the fridge.
Please ask your guests if someone is coming back to the city today so maybe he could bring my belongings here. Otherwise, I will have to ask my dad for help to take me to your place today. I need the keys and access card for tomorrow.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Regards,
Tomasz Zawadzki
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 681.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36538461538 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27574033731 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621794871795 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9864193748 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.9090909091 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266996412968 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951478035268 0.0766984524023 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750403794276 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162194828024 0.12726935374 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066873638685 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 8.37731958763 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.