Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Essay topics:

Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

it is a well known fact that obesity is a today's world problem. most of the well developed countries have problems with the overweighted population. In this essay I will attempt to discuss obesity issue and provide relevant solutions to reduce this problem.

First and foremost, fatness is generally caused by eating to much and moving to little. If we consume to high amount of energy, especially fat and sugars, but not burn off the energy through exercise or physical activity, much of the surplus energy will be stored by the body as fat. overweight is not just a cosmetic concern. it is a medical problem that increases risk of other diseases and health problems. there are many reasons why some people have difficulty avoiding obesity. Usually it is a combination of inherited factors combined with the environment and a personal diet and exercise choices.

However, there are many way to fight with obesity. Firstly, dieatry changes the most imporant factor is our dieat. our dieat must be focus around fresh fruits and vegetables. Moreover, food journal and use of a hunger scale would be a good habit. Besides, exercises will definitely help to reduce already existing body fat. Moderate-intensity activity two or three times a week will prevent weight gain.

In conclusion, problem of the overweighted people is a issue of the modern world. More and more people are dying because of the consequences of the obesity. Every country in the world should

implement a plan that will educat young people about problems of the obesity and provide good habits to avoid that problem.

Votes
Average: 6.1 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
it is a well known fact that obesity is a ...
^^
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a today' or simply 'todays'?
Suggestion: a today; todays
...it is a well known fact that obesity is a todays world problem. most of the well develo...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 66, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Most
...hat obesity is a todays world problem. most of the well developed countries have pr...
^^^^
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l developed countries have problems with the overweighted population. In this ess...
^^
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
..., fatness is generally caused by eating to much and moving to little. If we consum...
^^
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overweight
...ergy will be stored by the body as fat. overweight is not just a cosmetic concern. it is a...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 328, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...rweight is not just a cosmetic concern. it is a medical problem that increases ris...
^^
Line 5, column 411, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... of other diseases and health problems. there are many reasons why some people have d...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 20, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun way seems to be countable; consider using: 'many ways'.
Suggestion: many ways
...ercise choices. However, there are many way to fight with obesity. Firstly, dieatry...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Our
... the most imporant factor is our dieat. our dieat must be focus around fresh fruits...
^^^
Line 9, column 405, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... times a week will prevent weight gain. In conclusion, problem of the overweight...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 54, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
..., problem of the overweighted people is a issue of the modern world. More and mor...
^
Line 15, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...esity. Every country in the world should implement a plan that will educat young ...
^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Implement
...y. Every country in the world should implement a plan that will educat young people ab...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09056603774 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69359431582 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0831980855 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9444444444 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7222222222 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170824035243 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497757990438 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584699133148 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104868131029 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0728222719148 0.056905535591 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.65 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.