Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Obesity is a serious problem in many countries, especially in rich countries. Discuss ways to solve the problem. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

These days and ages, with the advent of urbanization and the rise in popularity of fast food, the rate of overweight people are growing. This problem is specifically relevant and even prevalent across the affluent nations. Now in this essay we will certainly analyse and figure out a way to solve this problem.

To begin with, we cannot deny the fact that fast food is incredibly popular in wealthy countries like USA and England. Indeed, in these developed countries, food advertising often encourages people to purchase sugary drinks, high-fat snacks and other unhealthy food. This situation is compounded by the fact that individuals in these nations suffer from the lack of proper guidance about the nutritional value of the food being consumed by the consumers on a large scale and they also are not aware of health risks. Therefore, a bad eating habits are followed by these unaware people. Moreover, a sedentary form of lifestyle is another major reason that leads to obesity. The people who spend long hours doing work and are stuck behind a desk are more likely to engage in an overweight problem.

Notwithstanding the severity of the fatness problem, however, there are a number of ways in which developed countries could combat it more effectively. Firstly, governments should raise public awareness about the harms caused by fatty foods and encourages them to have a sensible eating plan. Junk food advertising should be tightly controlled or banned by government altogether. Furthermore, people who suffer from sedentary lifestyle should be encouraged to do exercise on a daily basis. This physical activity might help people to burn off some calories. For instance, people are prone to obesity problem should be have easy and instant access to public exercise centres that are provided and advertised by governments.

In conclusion, although fatness is a dire issue in the developed world, if the above mentioned steps are taken, the situation will surely improve in the near future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19384615385 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7280701721 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609230769231 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2364879688 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1875 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115018114281 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0367703416808 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471238923863 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634103218745 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0450090660577 0.056905535591 79% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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