You cannot go to a company where you got an offer.Write a letter to the HR supervisor to -explain the reason why you decline the offer-express your gratitude-explain you like your current job very much

Essay topics:

You cannot go to a company where you got an offer.

Write a letter to the HR supervisor to

-explain the reason why you decline the offer

-express your gratitude

-explain you like your current job very much

Hello Sir or Madam,

I am writing with regard to job offer that you have sent to me recently.

At the beginning I am glad to be offered a position of website developer in your company. But I regret to say that I cannot accept the offer right now.

Right now, I am a part of the big project in my current company and this is one of the reasons why I cannot accept your offer. This project is related to the health and environment situation in Asian countries. Moreover, I have work agreement which not allow me to resign for my position for the next two years. In addition, I feel extremely satisfied from my job and the project we are working on.

I really appreciate of the job position that I have received from your company and have hope to be a part of your company in the future. I am thankful to you for an opportunity you have offered me. However, considering my actual position and satisfaction, of the current employment I must decline your offer. I wish all the best for your company.

Your sincerely,

Tomasz Zawadzki

Votes
Average: 6.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Sir or Madam, I am writing with regard to job offer th...
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Line 19, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t for your company. Your sincerely, Tomasz Zawadzki
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, really, so, i feel, in addition, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52879581152 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59256950299 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528795811518 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.859898466 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.0833333333 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9166666667 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286729982679 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106968215098 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833076675439 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143555946524 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100054028127 0.0580467560999 172% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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