Should citizen take out private health insurance?
It is a well known fact that health insurance is a problem discussed in every country. The question, however, arises is the health insurance should be taken by private industry or it should be a controlled by government. In this essay I will discuss positive and negative aspects of the private insurance.
First and foremost, it is common knowledge that every private company works much more efficient comparing to the one controlled by government. For example, Singapore has private health institutions and every citizen of the country can choose which private insurance they want and what the insurance going to cover in many different situations. On the other hand, Poland has public health institution and this example shows us that it does not work the way we wish. The biggest problem with public health institution in Poland is that there are lack of staff due to low monthly wages. Another issues with public health insurance is that the awaiting list to the doctor is relatively long.
Moreover, another advantage of the private health insurance is that competition has positive influence on the value that the institution provide and also decrease the price of the service that company provide. This is a basic rule how the economy works. More competitors on the market, better service and product for lower price.
However, some people may say that the private insurance is not the best idea for the country. The argument that they will give is that poor people may not be able to afford, due to high price.
In conclusion I believe, that the private health insurance can provide more benefits to the country by not only reducing waiting list to the doctors, but also by providing better and cheaper service.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99307958478 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55594835087 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501730103806 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6159984586 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.071428571 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6428571429 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336225215077 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108686473537 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924783755752 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175053373272 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0838430709718 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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