Television has had a significant influence on the culture of many societies. To what extent would you say that television has positively and negatively affected the culture development of your society?
It is common knowledge that television plays key role in today’s world. The question, however, arises what impact have the television on the culture societies? This essay will attempt to discuss both sides of arguments and provide relevant examples.
First and foremost, it is often claimed that television since have been created is number one of the most popular sources of the information around the world. For example, most television channel have the information program that give us the latest news from around the world and let us catch up on the current affairs. Moreover, these days it is almost impossible to find a house without a TV set, that shows us how essential television is for every single person. However, people may not be aware that is just an addiction.
On the other hand, however, it is also argued that people believe that the television is number fourth power in the country, because of the significant indirect social influence. For instance, every news can be presented from two perspectives. There are always two sides to a story. Besides, kids getting exposed to many things at very young age such as crimes, pornography and violence. Which can affect children’s brain development. Also, it is well-known fact that kids who watch more TV are more likely to be overweight.
From the arguments that I have presented above it can be seen that both arguments definitively have their supporters and opponents. It is my view though that only common sense and good patterns form parents can show kinds how to use and understand in right way television in today’s life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03358208955 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75556859392 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608208955224 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3019939356 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138558881225 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455228676166 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643033237674 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861740331548 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541785764686 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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