You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can move in
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I am peter potter and I agree to rent your apartment no 214, Yemen road. I was supposed to move to that apartment this month. However, I am afraid to inform you I won't be able to move in this month due to some office work.
Your apartment is closer to my office hence I decide to rent your apartment without a doubt. Yesterday, my boss informed me that I have to attend one conference which is really important for my work. The conference is next weekend for three days. As you can see, this conference is really important to me. I need preparation time for the conference, so I am not able to move in this month.
After coming back from the conference, I will shift into your apartment. I would highly appreciate it if you could allow me to move to the apartment next month. I deeply apologize for this inconvenience.
Looking forward to your response and thank you for giving your attention to this matter
Yours sincerely,
Peter potter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Johnson, I am peter potter and I agree to rent yo...
^^^
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tention to this matter Yours sincerely, Peter potter
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, really, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 792.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52571428571 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60025744408 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.7936732954 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.0 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339211099592 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123441820551 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083649009858 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228411470336 0.12726935374 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325406394194 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.