A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
With the accelerating population, animal exploitation is also increased. Some people are against the utilization of animals. On the contrary, some people believe that animals can be used for research and can become a source of food. I think animal exploitation should not happen as they are the same living creatures as humans.
Needless to say, Animal exploitation has several benefits. First and foremost, animals such as buffalo, cow, and chicken become the source of food as eating meat provides multiple nutrition. In some research, it is proven that eating fish is helpful for human's eye-sight. Other than this, some animal’s skin is used to make clothes and accessories such as leather bags and belts. Wool is the textile fibre from sheep and goats. To create warm-wear for winters, wool comes in handy.
On the contrary, extensive utilization of animals should not happen. Animals have the right to live the same as humans do. They are living things just as humans. Many animals get assassinated for human’s need for feed. Even though people have alternative sources of food, animals get slaughtered for the selfish needs of mankind. Some people believe that animals have emotions the same as humans. Animals have the ability to feel and express their feelings. In a zoo, Many animals are kept in a cell which should not happen because like people love the freedom to live with their instincts, animals also love their freedom of living.
I reckon, No one has the right to exploit any living creature. People should find alternative approaches to fulfill their needs.
In conclusion, every living creature has the right to live their life. Animal exploitation should not happen to fulfill the selfish needs of humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, i reckon, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09122807018 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56364717882 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501754385965 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4291805243 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.9545454545 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.9545454545 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.59090909091 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.459991820248 0.244688304435 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13787638982 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773874743359 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249981697823 0.151304729494 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101266329916 0.056905535591 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.35 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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