A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the sale and production of genetically modified food seems to be more popular around the world. it can not be denied that it bring great economic benefits, but there are some serious concern about this kind of food. however, some others argue that gm food is necessary if we want to meet the demand of an increasing world population.
Let start with the definition of gm foods which are produced from organisms that have had changes introduced into their DNA by using the methods of genetic engineering. it is often claimed that there are several concerns have been raised regarding this. Firstly, mentioning the effect on the environment that certain traits of gm crops might be introduced into the wild. also, genetically modified plants grown on farms are given traits that will make them resistant to the effects of herbicides, pesticides and drought. For example, spreading of genetically modified plants beyond controlled areas to become “super weeds”. Secondly, the effect on the human body should be considered. According to many scientific study, antibiotic resistant bacteria are often used to mark genetically modified plant cells. using gm food means that people are putting antibiotic resistant plant cells into their digestive systems. thus, this may cause to effect on the good bacteria in their intestinal tract.
however, some people believed that gm food is essential to meet the demands for an increasing world population. it is applied to provide a number of benefits to producers and consumers. these consist of reduced production costs which can make foods cheaper, fewer chemicals in vegetative products because of their improved pest resistance as well as less stress on the environment due to lower need for using toxic pesticides. In addition, it also improved availability as fruits maintain freshness in seasons when they would not be normally available. these are several great benefits that this kind of food bring to our life.
The second reason for continuing the gm foods is providing enough food for humans. In fact, the population is growing while food is at risk of being lacking, thus humanity wants to have livestock varieties that have some superiority in order to be able to provide enough food. For example, plants that are well drought resistant and highly resistant to pests in order to increase crop yields.
In conclusion, gm foods bring a lot of benefits for producers and consumers, beside having some nervousness about environment and human body as well. In my view of point, although genetically modified foods cause several concerns, it should be continuously sale and produce because of its benefits and human demand in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2271.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19679633867 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69196073487 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 691.2 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7705776679 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.227272727 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8636363636 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.40909090909 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220676172984 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066099869729 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494323649393 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130104538865 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270221889119 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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