You are due to start an English language course next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to the manager of the language school, Sally Flannigan. In your letter:
explain your situation
describe your problems
tell him/her when you think you can start.
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sally Flannigan,
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I am writing this letter to admit myself for not being able to attend your month-long english language course which is supposed to start on the 1st of November.
I am always keen on learning and mastering both written and verbal english especially for professional use. I have registered in your 4 week-long program for developing official use of this most widely used language. However, due to an unavoidable situation that has been encountered by my office, I will not be able to join. To be more precise, I have given a special assignment to arrange the annual conference which will be held on the 5th of the same month in Cox's Bazar. Moreover, I will have to lead the whole marketing team during the complete arrangement.
In this circumstance, I would like to apologize for my absence from your premises. In addition, it would be my pleasure if you allow me to join your upcoming lesson which will be started from mid-December.
Sorry for your inconvenience.
Sincerely yours,
A T M Jakir Alam
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 109, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nglish especially for professional use. I have registered in your 4 week-long pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92696629213 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90438571505 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674157303371 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8905335232 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299184228109 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100537351466 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765388959514 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158822230586 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475895405882 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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